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As I started to watch this, I was like, "Oh god, the color palette and animation is horrible.." But towards the middle, it started to show alot of class with the animation. The drawings weren't "great" but they weren't bad either. It could use work on shading, and the thickness of your outlines, along with the neatness of them as well.

This was pretty enjoyable for the most part, I'm a OoT fan, as well. And this was pretty nice. Kudos to you for the animation. Keep them coming, and try to improve on the shading; artwork; and Frame by frame work next time!

May 8, 2008

Author's Response:

yeah, i begun to realize that a lot of animations on this site have a lot of shading which i lacked, unfortunately i am in the middle of making another and it lacks shading as well, but in future ones i will work on it

OoT is my favorite game, i am basically the living strategy guide with extras, =P

btw, i am a lot better with a pen than a mouse when it comes to drawing, but i am still learning

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Score: 10

"Nice!"

submission: The FLF Collab

date: April 19, 2008

I really enjoyed this collab. When you showed me it on AIM, I thought this turned out pretty damn good. The menu music is a bit irritating and makes me not want to stay around for the whole author bios but the full animation in general is very pleasing.

Nice job guys.

April 19, 2008

Author's Response:

i understand, it was repetitive :)

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Score: 8

"Pretty fun."

submission: Romeo and Juliet in Song

date: April 7, 2008

The whole concept was nice and was pretty fun. I read the book last year, and it was a pretty good read. Your animation was alright, it could use some improvements, and one thing I enjoyed is how you created your own TV fuzz -- that was a plus.

Besides it all, I really enjoyed it and keep up the work. Maybe brush up on your replay and menu type of buttons though with the titles. I guess the sloppy look is what you were aiming for though.

Ah, kudos !

April 7, 2008

Author's Response:

Hey Rudy! Good to see ya again! And yea, the animation coulda used some work. I WAS kinda goin for the sloppy look, but maybe it coulda been improved more. Glad you liked the fuzz! It was really a bunch of brush sguiggles and a few dots :P
Btw, You gotta enter my brawl codeeee! :3